Fun fact: Ernest Hemingway and F. Scott Fitzgerald shared the same editor, a man named Maxwell Perkins. You’ve most likely never heard of him but it’s probably true to say, that without him, famous works such as The Great Gatsby, may not have become as iconic as they did. The author / editor relationship is a delicate one and I’ve been lucky enough to have a fantastic editor for my novels. With each round of edits, I’ve learnt something new so in this post, I’m sharing five pieces of editorial advice I received during the editing of The Good Mother, The Home, and The Perfect Lie, and how to implement it.
1. Develop your characters’ internal journeys
In my first novel, The Good Mother, the character arc of the protagonist Alison went from confident child to nervous first year university student, from excited teenager in love to confused victim, before finally becoming completely broken. To show this, I needed to help the reader understand the effects of what was happening to Alison by drawing her character arc more clearly. The overall thinking is the more an author can get underneath the skin of all the main characters, the more invested readers will be in the ultimate outcome.
Action point: map out the arcs of your main characters and ask yourself: are the actions and motivations in line with their internal journey?
2. Ensure your story is credible
Any story has to be credible but it’s easy to get lost in our work and forget about the reader. As writers, we have to be extra careful not to test reader’s suspension of disbelief. If you break the spell by stopping readers in their tracks to question something, then the magic of reading the book and trying to figure it out gets broken too.
Action point: for each major scene, question whether the actions and reactions of each character are convincing. If you have doubts, your reader will too.
3. Write strong chapter openings and endings
It’s easy to lose readers, especially if they are reading on a device rather than a good old-fashioned book. As a result, the skill of hooking the reader into each chapter and luring them to the next one has never been so important.
Action point: review each chapter in turn paying attention to the opening and closing lines.
4. Develop secondary characters fully
While the focus is usually on the protagonist, it’s also important to create well-rounded and authentic secondary characters. All the characters must feel three-dimensional to the reader otherwise they’re marked out too early as plot devices which will leave the reader feeling cheated.
Action point: create character profile sheets for secondary characters and do specific writing exercises to help develop them further.
5. Build the tension
Even if you’re not writing a thriller, creating tension in your manuscript is still a valuable tool in your writer’s kit to keep the reader engaged. With ever-decreasing attention spans, it’s important to build in more tension in your work, to keep the reader turning the pages and lead them to a powerful climax.
Action point: map out your story onto the narrative arc making sure key plot points build to a peak with a good pace.
Related posts: Writing Tips From My Favourite Authors
Ready to write your book? Join my online course and get started! This 8-week course takes you through the journey to becoming an author, from coming up with ideas to getting published, and everything in between, all with the guidance and support of a number 1 bestselling author. Click here to learn more and watch the free masterclass replay. >>>
If you haven’t done so already, subscribe to this blog for more writing tips! I’m always adding new posts to the feed, so if you’re not subscribed, there’s a good chance you’ll miss out. Subscribe now and get my FREE downloadable PDF, 5 Ways To Unleash Your Inner Author.